*) - CHAAL
(Mehfooz Ali)
Inspector ram,6 feet 2 inch lambi kadkaathi ka pehalwani jism wala shaks.uski umar to hai 40 saal ki lekin wo isse kahi kam umar ka lagta hai.
Naam to uska ram hai lekin kaam raam wale katai nahi karta.ek number ka rishwatkhor pulisia ram kanoon ki dharaon ko tod marodkar usne bahut maal ragadta hai.bahar kaarobaariyon(businessmen) mein yeh kahawat mashhoor hai ki bhagwan gunde mawaliyon se samna karwa de lekin insp ram se nahi.gussa har pal uski naak pe birajmaan rehta hai.jis thane me wo incharge hai wo posh ilaake me aata hai.
Hawaldar sham – 5 feet 4 inch,diyasalai jaisa jism,45 varsheeya,or inspector ram ka muh chadha.
Champak – 40 ki lapete ka bhari bharkam kaya ka swami.chehre pe hamesha jaldbazi ke bhav rakhne wala.aise bhav jaise ki kahi pahuchne ki jaldi me ho.
Meena – 30 varsheeeya,khoobsoorat or charhari kaya ki swamini.jisko ek naazar dekh le wo uspe fida ho jaye.
Ek dopahar jab ram bahar se round lagakar thane wapis aaya to uska swagat kiya hawaldaar sham ki khisiyaani muskurahat ne.
“abe daant bhi tabhi faadne chahiye jabki wo dikhane layak ho..sala poora batteesi to paan ki laali se aisa laal kiye ho ki khoon peene wale pishach lagte ho”
“areeee sahib......wo kya hai ki baat hi kuch aisi hai.”
“kyun,teri joru phir kisi ke saath muh kala karwate pakdi gayi?”
“kya sahib,aapko to bas koi baat pata chalni chahiye..me to............”
“dekh jo kehna hai jaldi keh.ek to sala 10 din se koi mota kaam hath nahi laga hai oopar se yaha ghuste hi tere yeh daant dekhne pade to dimaag ki sari power me short circuit ho jata hai”
“wahi to batana chah raha hu itni der se......seth champak aaya hua hai..pareshan dikhai deta hai.”
“abe to mujhe phone kyu nahi kiya?”
“phone aapka lage to kare naa??is daur me bhi baba aadam ke zamane ka phone rakhe ho.lagta hi nahi kabhi.”
“theek hai theek hai...mere chamber me hain champak?”
“haan”
Inspector ram jaise hi apne chamber me dakhil hua waise hi ek bhari bharkam aakriti uske pairon me saashtaak pranaam karne lagi.seth champak ins ram ke kadmo ke sir diye pada tha,jaarokataar ro raha tha or usne dono haathon se ram ki taange pakad rakhi thi.
“inspector sahib,mujhe bacha lo.wo mujhe maar daalegi”
“abe kya behaadupan hai....taang chhood madar%&$.....chhod taang ko”champakdas ne taang chord di “ab araam se kursi pe beth ja...samjha,or dobara aisa drama kiya to usse pehle me maar daalunga,samjhe”
Is baat pe champakdas ne haule se apni gardan hilai.jeb se rumaal nikalkar apne aansu saaf kiye.table par rakhe hue glass se pani piya or phir shuru ho gaya
“inspector sahib mujhe bacha lo.me bahut badi museebat me phas gaya hoon.ab aap hi mujhe isse bahar nikaal sakte hain”
“dekh champak,tu aise apna randi rona royega to meri kuch samajh me nahi aayega.tu ek kaam kar.shuru se bata ki hua kya hai??theek hai...haan to shuru kar”
“inspector sahib me or mera bhai sampat pichle 10 saalon se sarrafa bazaar me apni dukaan chala rahe hain.kabhi koi ragda nahi hua.kabhi kisi ne humpar ulta seedha ilzam nahi lagaya.hum dono bhai sharafat se apna dhandha chalate hain.lekin pichle kuch maheeno se mene mahsoos kiya ki sampat badal sa gaya hai.wo pehle ki tarah mujhse baat nahi karta or.....”
“ek minute ek minute...tera bhai sampat to pichle 10 din se lapata hai..hai naa?tune FIR bhi darj kara rakhi hai sarrafa bazaar wale thane mein.”
“baja farmaya huzoor.wo rapat mene hi likhwai hai.”
“to phir tu yaha kyu aaya hai??sarrafa bazaar thane me inspector panther ke paas kyu nahi jata??yeh unhi ka maamla hai.”
“yeh panther g ka maamla nahi hai sir g..aap meri baat poori to sun lijiye.”
“suna....poori baat sunaiyo”
“haan to mein keh raha tha ki pichle ek saal se sampat ke chalchalan me mujhe jhol nazar aaya.wo raat ko der se ghar aane laga tha or jo sampat daaru ke naam se hi muh bana leta tha wo ab roz nashe mein ghar ghusta tha.is wajah se uski gharwali bhi usse pareshan rehne lagi.usne bhi mujhse sampat ke baare mein baat ki.mene usko dilasa diya or samjhaya ki mein sab theek kar dunga.phir mene is bare mein sampat ko khoob jhad pilai.or usse in sab harkato ka karan poocha.lekin usne mujhse kuch nahi bataya.haan daaru ka usne kaha ki ab nahi piyega.......”
“abe chup kyu ho gaya?”
“wo ek cigarette mil jati to.....”
Inspector ne uski or khoonkhar nazron se dekha.lekin kaha kuch nahi.ghoorte hue hi jeb se cigarette ka packet nikala.ek cigarette khud sulgai or ek champak ko thamai.
“haan to mein keh raha tha ki mere samjhane ke baad wo kabhi peekar to nahi aaya par uski harkaten or rahasyamayi ho gayi..pehle to kisi ka bhi phone aata wo usse mere samne hi baat karta tha lekin ab wo akele me jakar phone attend karne laga.isse mera matha or thanak gaya or mene uski jasoosi karne ka nirnay liya...bas sara khel tab jakar samajh me aaya meri”
“kaisa khel??dekh champak,tune bahut jalebi bana li.ab seedhe seedhe bata ki majra kya hai.warna tera bhai to aajkal absent chal hi raha hai.me tujhe bhi is duniya se absent kar doonga”
“bas g,kahani poori ho hi gai...haan to mein keh raha tha ki jab uski jasoosi se mujhe pata chala ki wo sattebaaz hai, cricket ke matcho me satta lagata hai or pichle kai maheeno se haarta ja raha hai.or isi wajah se karzdaar ho gaya hai.pehle pahal to mujhe gussa aaya par phir to jaise matha hi tharak gaya hamara”
“aisa kya hua?”
“wo sasura hame maarkar hamari daulat hadapne ka plan bana raha tha.or apne isi plan ko anjaam dene me laga hua tha patthha.”
“oye bhos*&^^ ....me sab samajh gaya.isse pehle ki wo tujhe maarta tune hi uska bharatnatyam kar diya..kyu,yahi kiya na?”
“aap mahaan ho inspector sahib,aakhirkaar kaise aapne meri baat poori hui bina hi jaan liya ki mein kehna kya..........”
“champak,yaha kursi pe itne saalon se bethe hue hum paad nahi maar rahe hain..samjhe..ab bata ki kaise mara?kaha mara?teri sath kaun shamil tha?or ab tu yaha aaya kyu??chal...shuru kar”
“ek minute mai baap”kehte hue hawaldaar sham ne apni rangeen batteesi dikhate hue andar pravesh kiya “wo kya hai ki bahar khade khade taange dukh gayi to socha ki aage ki baat andar hi jakar sun lu.”
Inspector ne usko vinashkari nazro se ghoorte hue mann hi mann me hazar galiya di.lekin pratyaksh me kuch nahi kaha.bas samne wali kursi ki or ishara kar diya.
“huzoor aapke hawaldaar ke saamne............kahi isne kahi jakar gaa diya to mera kya hoga?”
“dekh sampat....champak,jo bhi naam hai tera..guarentee to is baat ki bhi nahi k mein hi jake gaa du..kyu?lekin tu aaya hai.tune vishwaas kiya to ek baat ki guarantee to le hi leta hu...tujhe is ragde se nikalwa naa diya to mera naam ram nahi..chal aage bata”
“haan to me keh raha tha ki jab mujhe pata chala ki wo mujhe maarne wala hai to mujhe bahut dukh hua lekin bahut jaldi hi wo dukh gusse me badal gaya..sala mene to maa baba ke marne ke baad shadi tak nahi ki..uski shadi karwai...usko acchhhe se acchha khana,pehanna diya..or wo hi mujhe tapkaane ki soch raha tha..kher mene is babat uski gharwali ko bataya.pehle pahal to usne yakeen nahi kiya lekin baad me jab apni aaknkho or kaano ka istemaal kiya to wo bhi asliyat jaan gayi..pareshan to wo ho hi gayi thi usse lekin itna pareshan hogi ki usko maarne ki baat karegi..........”
“ek minute..sampat ko maarne ka idea uski gharwali ne diya tujhe?”
“aisa nahi hai huzoor,idea to mera hi tha lekin uski gharwali maan gayi.phir baad me usne mujhe bataya ki iski wajah kya thi..sampat dar asal kisi kaam ka nahi tha.bole to wo apni gharwali ko khush rakh pane mein aksham tha.ya yun kahe ki....”
“hehehehe” hawaldar ne phir apne 32 namoono ki numaish ki “hum samajh gaye champak g,samajh gaye jo aap kehna chah rahe ho.yahi naa ki sampaat namar...”
“khamoossssh sham,chup kar apni gandi zabaan ko”inspector se sabar ka baandh aakhirkar toot hi gaya.ek nazar sham pe daalkar usne apni drishti phir champak ki or gaad di “kya ch#^%$& hai.itni der se dekh raha hu tujhe...bahut hui teri mahagatha...ab kaan kholke mere sawalo ka jawab de”
“ji huzoor” champak ne sehmi aankho se dekhte hue mundi hilai
“tujhe pata chala ki tera bhai tujhe marne wala hai or isi wajah se tu usko maarega..tune yeh baat uski gharwali ko kyu batai?tujhe pata nahi tha ki wo is baat se bigad sakti hai..?”
“pata to nahi tha par ek baat me aapko batata chalu ki...........”kehte hue champak ne apni nazren zameen me gada li
“ssaale jaldi bata.bahut time khota kar liya toone”
“wo kya hai ki wo mujhe acchhi lagti thi”
“hehehehe” hawaldar bhala ab kaise khamosh rehta “sharam karo seth,kuch to sharam karo.apne chhote bhai ki gharwali pe buri nazar rakhte hue tumhe...”
“bas bas pata hai mujhe ki tu kitna sharmdar hai.sala apni gharwali ke karname jante hue bhi abhi tak uske sath hai” inspector ne hawaldar ko ghoorte hue kaha“haan to champak.uski gharwali tujhe pasand aa gayi thi.kabse?”
“kabse ka kya kahu maalik..bas yeh samajh lo ki jabse usne mujhe bataya ki sampat kisi kaam ka nahi to bas tabhi meri neeyat kharab hui uspe..mene socha ki sampat nikamma hai to me to kaam ka hoon.sampat ke baad me usko khush rakhunga.or phir ek 2 mulakaato me wo.....”
“is baar agar toone daant faade” inspector ko andesha tha ki champak ki is baat pe hawaldar phir apni aukaat dikha sakta hai isiliye usne champak ki baat ke beech me hi hawaldar ko chetaavni di.
“haan to phir tum dono kabaddi ke match khelne lage..or phir ek din tum dono ne milkar sampat ko permanent lamblet kar diya or uski gumshudgi ki report sarrafa bazaar thane me karwai.jispe itne dino ki kaaryawaai ke baad bhi police ko koi lead nahi mili or milti bhi kaise.sampat to samaapt ho gaya tha.yahan tak bhi sab theek hai.sampat ki gharwali ke aage peeche bhi koi nahi...is wajah se wo automatically tumhare paas hi rehti.par sawaal yeh hai ki jab sabkuch successful ho gaya tha to tum yaha kyu apna bhanda fodne aa gaye??”
“baat darasal yeh hai mai baap ki pichle 1 hafte se mujhe uske sapne aa rahe hain.sapne mein sampat ki lash mera peecha karti hai or mujhe maarne ki koshish karti hai.bas isi wajah se me pareshan hu”
“hehehehehe” is baar inspector ki chetaavni se pehle hi hawaldar ne karnama kar diya “abe jamoore,jab tujhme dam nahi tha to kyu mara sampat ko?or haan ins saab,ek baat to me zaroor kahunga.kahi suna tha ki hardcore dil wale hi khoon kar sakte hain.kyunki wo uske baad shant rehte hain.lekin agar champak jaisa kamzor dil wala kisi ka khoon kar le to yahi hoga joy eh keh raha hai.ab meri samajh me aaya ki.....”
“ek pench ab bhi hai” inspector ne hawaldar ki baat ko ansuna karte hue kaha “tujhe jab lash pareshan kar rahi hai to tu kisi ojha ya maulvi mulla ke paas kyu nahi gaya.yaha hamare paas hi apna ilaaj karwane kyu aa gaya?”
“huzoor aapse bada ojha,maulvi mulla kaun hoga..aapke kisse to mush hoor hain yaha ki galiyon mein..bas isiliye kahi or na jakar aapke darbaar me matthha tekne aaya hoon.aap jo kahenge me dene ko tayyar hoon.jitni rakam maangoge usse zada hi doonga..bas mere sapno me us lash ka aana band karwa do”
“abe ch$%%#...tujhe kya hum koi doctor lagte hain jo tere sapno ka ilaaj karenge..?”hawaldar gussaya.
“huzoor me chahta hoon ki aap mere garden se uski lash nikalkar antim sanskar kara dijiye..wo vidhiwat panchtatwo me jaayega to mere bure sapne khud ba khud khatam ho jaayenge..me khud yeh kaam kyu nahi kar sakta iski wajah me bata chuka hoon.mujhe darr hai ki mere yeh karne se sampat ki aatma kahi mujhe.......”
“theek hai theek hai” inspector ne sari baat samajhte hue kaha “dekh champak, tera kaam bahut teda or anokha hai.hum lash ko nikal to lenge lekin vidhivat antim sanskaar ke liye pandit or shamshan walo ko bhi chadhava chadhana padega.to fees thodi zada ho jayegi.par tujhe chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi.tere sapne hum khatam karke hi dam lenge.”
“huzoor,dhanya hai yeh samaaj jaha aap jaise polisiye maujood hain..aapka laaakh laakh shukriya mai baap”
“abe tu sarkaar ki tareef kar raha hai ya joote maar raha hai” hawaldar ne poocha.
“nahi mein to bas........”
“chal oye,bahut hua.” Inspector ne hawaldar se kaha. Phir champak ki or dekhkar bola “aaj raat tera kaam ho jayega”
Champak thane se chala jata hai.inspector ram or unka muhchadha hawaldaar kaam ko anjaam den eke liye zaroori tayyariyon mein lag jaate hain.
Usi raat ka ek drishya.
Jagah – champak ka lawn
Andhera aisa ki hath ko hath na sujhai de.paas me ek lalten rakhi thi jiski madham roshni me wo ek doosre ka chehra hi dekh pa rahe the.
Hawaldar phaawde se gaddhha khod raha tha or paas hi champak ke sath inspector ram khada tha.1 ghante ki mehnat ke baad gaddha jab khai me badal gaya tab inspector ne champak se poocha.
“tujhe yakeen hai ki tune yahi gada tha lash ko?”
“yahi,bilkul yahi gada tha huzoor..lekin ab to wo yaha nahi hai.kahi usko pata to nahi chal gaya ki mene tumhe yaha is kaam ke liye bulaya hai.zaroor aisa hi hua hoga.ab wo mujhe nahi chhodega inspector saab..mujhe maar dalega”
“abe door hat mujhse,kyu baat bebaat mera daman pakadta hai”. Inspector jhalla gaya “zaroor tujhse kuch kami rahi hogi....sun,,,,tujhe poora yakeen hai ki toone sampat ko lash banakar yaha gada tha???kahi aisa to nahi ki wo zinda ho??ya kahi aisa to nahi ki tune usko kahi or gaada ho?”
“aisa bilkul nahi ho sakta inspector saab.mene usko acchhi tarah check kiya tha.dil ki dhadkane or nabz sab tasalli karne ke baad hi yaha gada tha.or jagah bhi yahi thi”
“hmmm” is poore prakaran mein pehli baar ram ke maathe par chinta ki kuch lakeeren ubhri. “tumne or sampat ki gharwali ne usko yaha gaada hai yeh baat tumhare alawa kis kisko pata hai??”
“2 log or hain mai baap”
“abe saale dhurmuk...poori duniya ko bata deta apna kaarnama...zaroor unhi me se kisi ne lash gayab ki hogi.”
“lekin huzoor wo 2 to aap hain..ek aap ek aapka hawaldar.aapko hi bataya hai mene”
“ssaale” inspector ne ek haath ghumakar kanpati par jada champak ke. “ssaale,poora item hai tu bhi.dimaag kharaab kar diya kameene ne jab se mila hai”
“me bhi kuch kahu” ek khanakti hui awaaz ne unke beech ke tanaav ko mukt kiya “mein hu meena, sampat ki gharwali”
“hmmm” inspector “to tu hai meena” kehte hue jaise hi inspector ne meena ko dekha to chaunk pada.lekin usne apne bhaav hawaldar or champat se chupate hue kaha “suna hai sampat ko marne mein tub hi thi iske saath.chal to tu hi asliyat ke ru ba ru kara hame.”
“dar-asal sampat ko humne yahi gada tha inspector sahib.usko goli inhone mari thi phir jab wo mar gaya to hum dono usko ghaseetkar yah laaye or gaad diya.par wo is kabar se kaha chala gaya yeh me nahi jaanti.me bhi bahut pareshan hu or oopar chhat se itni der se aapka yeh kaaryakarm dekh rahi thi.jab raha nahi gaya to yaha aa gayi.ab aap hi batao ki hum kya karen”
“huzoor” hawaldar inspector se bola “mujhe to lagta hai ki aisa kuch hua hi nahi hai.yeh dono milkar koi chal chal rahe hain.zaroor daal mein kuch kala hai.”
“mujhe nahi lagta k daal kali hai sham...balki ab to mujhe sab samajh me aane laga hai..” inspector ne meena ko dekhte hue kaha. “champak,me meena g se akele me kuch baat karna chahta hu..tujhe koi etraaz?”
“kahi aap mujhpe shak to nahi kar rahe?” champak ne ashankit nazro se inspector ko dekha.
“abe dhoomad hi rahega tu bhi.....khoon tune kiya hai to shak kis baat kaa?????ulta hum tujhe bacha rahe hain” hawaldar arthpoorn tareeke se muskurate hue bola“ab agar inspector sahib akele mein meena g se kuch poochna chahte hain to usme tum dono ka hi bhala hoga”
“tu chup kar be” inspector bola. “dekh champak,me jo kar raha hu teri bhalai ke liye hi kar raha hu...ab tu aram kar or mujhe apna kaam karne de”
Kehte hue inspector ne meena ki kalai pakdi or usko lekar ghar me dakhil hota chala gaya.peeche hawaldar or champak unhe jata hue dekhte rahe.
“ek baat bata champak?”hawaldar ne poocha “yeh meena kis tarah ki aurat hai?bole to ek nazar me dekhne se to shareef lagti hai par aisa hai nahi”
“dekho hawaldar,tum galat samajh rahe ho.wo ek shareef aurat hai.wo to sampat me kami thi jo wo mere se lag gayi”
“or ab agar wo hamare sahib se lag gayi to???kher,tu chinta mat kar.aakhir hum teri chinta door karne hi to yaha aaye hain”
Or phir isi tarah ki baton mein 30 minute guzar gaye.30 min ke baad inspector ki sath meena andar se wapis aayi.uske chehre par ab pehle ki tarah chinta nahi thi.balki wo ab khush nazar aa rahi thi.hawaldar usko dekhte hi samajh gaya ki khichdi pak chuki hai.
“tera maamla sulat gaya champak.” Kehte hue inspector ne apni revolver nikali jispe silencor laga tha,ek halki piitt ki awaz hui or champak kate vriksh ke samaan gir pada.bechare to tadapne tak ka mauka nahi mila.or pal ke 100we hisse me uske pran pakheru ud gaye. “ab aaram kar”
Hawaldar ko kaato to khoon nahi.ekdum sunn bas palak jhapkaaye bina dekhta reh gaya inspector ko.uski samajh me kuch nahi aaya.
“ghabra mat shamme........khel khatam ho gaya.baki baatein tujhe raste me samjhata hu.”
30 minute baad
Jagah – inspector ka chamber
“yeh sari planning meena ki thi.uski nazar jab dono ki daulat par par padi to uska dimaag kharab ho gaya”
“lekin wo daulat to usi ki thi,baharaal wo sampat ki patni thi.is lihaaz se sab uska hi to tha”
“baat teri theek hai.lekin iska kya karen ki jab meena sari daulat hadapna chahti ho?usi ne aise halat paida kiye ki champak ko apne bhai par shak ho gaya.or usne isi shak me uski jaan le li.meena ko champak ke kamzor dil ka pata tha.usne recording me poora katl kaid bhi kar liya tha.agar champak ko sampat ki lash ke sapne na chamakte to meena videotape police ko post kar deti.lekin isse pehle champak ki fatt gayi.usko apne bhai ki lash sapne me dikhne lagi or wo aa dhamka hamare paas.”
“wo to theek hai.par aapne usko mara kyu?paise to champak bhi de hi raha tha aapko.phir meena se kyu mil gaye?”
“kyunki mene usko pehchan liya tha.meena ek tawaif thi sham.or shadi se pehle uska mujra shaher bhar me mashhoor tha.wahi mene usko dekha tha.uske saath rangraliyan manate raeeszadon ki videotapes se mene bahut note koote the.hum un raeeszadon ko blackmail katre the.meena ko champak ki haweli me dekhte hi mera matha thanak gaya.or uski asliyat mene usse khulwakar hi dam liya.”
“baat to theek hai saab.par aap meena ko hi kyu nahi mare??champak ko kyu mare?aap champak se meena ki setting kar sakte the..meena se hi kyu champak ki setting karai?”
“kyunki champak se hum itna maal nahi jhad sakte the jitna ki yeh meena hame de sakti hai.samjhe ki nahi
samjhe?dekh,meena ek din aisi gayab hui ki hamara laga bandha dhan dha chaupat ho gaya.blackmailing ka
dhandha.ab uske aane se usme dobara rang bhar denge.rahi champak k marne ki baat,to bhaiyya khoon to usne kiya tha.mann ko ye samjha lenge ki use us karm ki saza mili. or ab ye mat poochna ki lash kisne gayab ki waha se.samjha?” “sab samajh gaya mai baap.sab samajh gaya”
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Note - Is kahani me ek hissa ved prakash Sharma g ke upanyaas se prerit hai..sapne me lash ka dikhna..yeh unhone apne ek novel me dikhaya tha..lekin mene us upanyas ka wahi hissa bhar yaha use kiya hai..baki poori kahani meri apni kahani hai..dhanyawaad
Rating - 67/100
Judge's Comment - "you covered the dirty stuff which we do not read in newspapers but happens.kudos 4 that. I thought this was a interesting, at times funny story. Ending was a good twist. but this piece lacked the entertainment and narration buildup at few places."
*) - Talaash
(Rahul Ranjan)
Author's
Note/Disclaimer :
Following story contains three different story arcs occurring at different places but at same time.
BLUE_COLOR------->Story of Nisha told from 3rd person point of view.
GREEN_COLOR----->Story of Varun told from 1st person point of view.
ORANGE_COLOR--->Story of CID investigation told from 3rd person point of view
BLACK_COLOR------>Climax of story told from 3rd person point of view
Readers can either read all arc at same time or one arc at one time to avoid confusion. Following story contains few elements from previous part. However author has already incorporated all the necessary elements from previous part. It is completely upto reader to whether read previous part Khoj--Match 13 or not. Reading or not reading will NOT have any effect on this part.
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2004-AD----
Der raat Bangalore mein kisi prayogshala mein bahas chal rahi thi.
Priyanka:-(computer-par-kaam-karte-hue)Inki madad se brain-tumors ka ascharyajanak-roop se illaj kiya jaa sakta hai.
Saurav:-Par ye Neonites Parmanu Bomb se bhi do-guna tabahi machane ki kuvvat rakhte hain.
Priyanka:-L.O.K.I Mode ke codes sirf humlog jaante hain.Tum bekar mein hi over-react kar rahe ho.
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Aaj bhi uss prayogshala mein do log maujud hain.Unme se ek---35-40 umra ka purush---kursi par bandha hai to dusra 3-button Black-Suit pehne 34-35 saal ki aurat bagal mein khari hai.Aurat purush ke pairon se satakar 4-5 candles jalati hai.Pura kamra aadmi ki cheekh se tharrra uthata hai.Aurat usse door hatkar jeb se wrapped Sandwich nikal, khane lagti hai.
Aadmi:-(cheekhte-hue)9-saal pehle achanak hi ek din Saurav-Priyanka apna laptop lekar chale gaye.Ve dono bahut ghabraye hue the.Mujhe kisi codes-vodes ke baare mein nahi pata.
Aurat:-(hath-jharkar)Thank-You Mr.Anjay
Fir aurat coat se Beretta nikal Anjay ko goli maar deti hai.Uske baad mobile nikalti hai.
Mobile:-Have you got the codes, Miss.Nisha?
Nisha:-Not yet.I think only they know the codes Mr.Anderson.
Mobile:-Find them.You had them 4-years ago.You failed.Don't test my patience again.
Main Varun-Malhotra hoon.Yun to main Canada mein rehta hoon lekin apne college ke jigri mitra Saurav-Priyanka ki talash mein Shimla se 10km door Mashobra shahar aaya tha.Dono 9-saal pehle Mashobra aaye the aur 4-saal pehle achanak aise gayab hue ki kisi ko kaano-kaan khabar nahi hui.Dono ke gayab hone ka iljam unke cottage ke purv-malik Mr.Roy par laga.Jab police-station pahuncha to pata chala Roy ki mrityu hogayi hai.Lekin uske paas se baramad ki gayi sabooton mein mujhe Priyanka ki diamond ring mili.Maine agle kuch dino mein Shimla ka chappa-chappa chann maara.Par sab jagah nakaami hath lagi.Kisne unka apaharan kiya hoga.Kya ve jinda hain bhi ya nahin.Achanak dimag mein bijli si kaundhi.Kahin apaharan ka kaaran vyavsaye-sambandhi to nahi.Police ne bhi kabhi iss pahlu par dhyan nahi diya tha.Bas fir kya tha.Agle din main flight se seedha Bangalore sthit unke ghar pahuncha.Bangalore waale ghar par bhi taala latka tha.Saurav-Priyanka kuch aur logon ke saath apne ghar mein bane prayogshala mein reasearch karte the.Chupte-chipate unke ghar mein dakhil hua.Ghar khandhar haalat mein tha.Dhundte hue main unke prayoghsala pahuncha.Ankhe fati-ki-fati reh gayi jab wahan par lash dekhi.Lash Mr.Anjay ki thi jo Saurav ke saath kaam karte the.Halanki main koi jasoos nahi, fir bhi aasani se bata sakta tha ki lash 3-4 din purani hai.Anjay ki maut saaf ishara kar rahi thi ki main sahi raaste par tha.Bangle se baahar nikal main aage barhne ka raasta sochne laga.
CID,Bangalore bureau mein aaj din ki shuruat thori alag hui.
SeniorOfficer,Rahul:-Suna hai aaj naya officer CID join kar raha hai.
Bureau ke parking lot mein white-stallian bike rukti hai.
ACP:-Haan.Bahut hi honhar aur talented officer hai.
Sawaar helmet utar bike ko uchit roop se park karta hai.
JuniorOfficer,Prachi:-He is very down-to-earth inspite of being from rich family.
Fir vo sawaar Bureau mein pravesh karta hai.
JuniorOfficer,Amar:-Officer Amar Vatsa reporting on duty sir.
ACP:-Welcome Amar.
Tabhi phone ki ghanti baj uthti hai.Karan phone uthata hai.
SeniorOfficer,Karan:-Lash mili hai sir.
Prayogshala pahunchte hi sabhi CID officers investigation mein juut gaye.
Karan:-(photo-khenchte-hue)Ek raah chalte aadmi ne kisiko yahanse nikalte dekh police mein report likhwayi.
Amar:-(lash-ka-muyana-karte-hue)Point blank range.Khooni ne pehle ise tarpaya aur fir jaan se maara.
ACP:-Lash ko forensic-lab bhej do.Mujhe iss admi ki kundli chahiye.
Shimla jaane waali train mein baithi Miss.Nisha apne khayalon mein khoyi hui hai.
Nisha:-(man-mein)Main 4-saal pehle Mashobra mein apne lakshya ke bahut karib pahunch chuki thi.Saurav-Priyanka ki har activities par meri nazar rehti.Yahan tak ki unke morning walks route ko bhi follow karti.Maine unka apaharn karne ke liye upyukt din chuna.Lekin uss manhoos din sirf kuch chhano keliye meri nazar unse hati.Aur unka kisi aur ne apaharan kar liya.Par maine bhi haar nahi maani.4-saal aasman-zameen ek kar diya unki talash mein.Meri pure vishwa mein faili khabriyon ka sanjaal bhi unke baare mein khamosh rahi hai.Akhir aisa kaun sa apaharkarta paida ho gaya jo meri aankhon mein dhool jhonkta aaraha hai.Mujhe ab tarika badalna hoga.
CID Bureau mein----
Prachi:-Lash Mr.Anjay ki hai.Expert in Nanotechnology.9-saal pehle ye,Mr.Suresh,Saurav-Sharma aur Priyanka-Sharma Brain-Tumor illaj par kaam kar rahe the.
ACP:-Ye Saurav-Priyanka wahi jora haina jo 4-saal pehle gayab hua tha.
Rahul:-Yes sir.Inhone usi prayogshala mein Neonites ka avishkar kiya jiske jariye kathin-se-kathin Brain-Tumors ka illaj minuton mein hojaata.
Karan:-Inke research ko Scylla-Company sponsor karti thi.Scylla america ki bahut bari raw-material supplier company hai.Ye NASA rocket-ships ke liye raw-material supply karti hai.Haal hi mein jo naya upgrah NASA dwara bheja gaya, use safal banane mein iss company ka bara hath tha.Company ka malik Mr.Shane-Anderson hai.
Amar:-Jab 9-saal pehle Saurav-Priyanka sab kuch chorr,Shimla chale gaye to research aur funding band hogayi.
ACP:-Saurav-Priyanka ke gayab aur Mr.Anjay ki maut aapas mein jure hue hain.Rahul aur Amar---tum dono fauran Shimla jao aur Saurav-Priyanka case ki naye sire se jaanch karo.
Anjay ki maut ke baad mujhe aur koi raah nahi dikh raha tha.Par tabhi mujhe research team ke chauthe member Mr.Suresh ki yaad aayi.Agar Anjay ka katl Saurav-Priyanka ke apaharankarta nekiya haito agla shikar Suresh hoga.Bina koi pal gavaye uske ghar pahuncha aur ghanti bajayai.Ek home-nurse ne darwaza khola.Nurse bina kuch kahe mujhe Mr.Suresh ke kamre mein lejaati hai.Suresh wheel-chair par baithe khirkiyan dekh raha tha.Pairon tale zameen khisak gayi jab pata chala ki 3-saal pehle paralysis se unka pura sharir jarr hogaya.Ab ve har-mans ka putla reh gaye hain.Main Suresh ke paas ghutno par baith gaya.
Varun:-Pata nahi tum meri baat sunbhi paa rahe hoya nahi.Kaash main tum logo ke sampark mein rehta.To shayad kuch madad kar paata.
Suresh ke annsu saaf bata rahe the ki vo meri baato ko bhali-bhanti samajh raha hai.
Varun:-Saurav-Priyanka ki jaan khatre mein hai.Agar tumhe unke baare mein kuch bhi pata hai to please mujhe batao.
Suresh ki machalti aanke kisi or ishara kar rahi thi.Uski aankhe purani mez ki or ishara kar rahi thi.Main mez ke paas gaya aur usme sthit drawer khola.Drawer khulte hi meri nazar lifafe par pari.Lifafe par likha tha--Varun.
Shimla pahunchte hi Rahul-Amar seedhe police-station kior ravana hote hain.Vahan par Head-Inspector ne Saurav-Priyanka ki case file unhe saump di.Dono case ko study karne mein joot gaye.
Karib 3-ghante baad----
Rahul:-Ye sach mein bahut terha case hai.Sabse bara raaz jewelleries gayab hone ka hai.Mr.Roy akhiri dum tak kehta reh gaya ki usne koi chori nahi kari.Kahin apharankarta nehi to gehne churaye nahi?
Amar:-Agar aisa hai to kidnappers ne abtak saare jewelleries bech diye honge.Aage barhne ka sachmuch koi raasta nahi hai.
Tabhi kisi ko maarne ki awaz sunai deti hai.Hawaldar kisi ko peet raha tha.Amar hawaldar ko rokne jaata hai.
Hawaldar:-Sir ye admi chori karte hue pakra gaya.(Evidence-bag-dikhate-hue)Isne ye churaya.
Amar evidence-bag ko dekh kar hairan hojaata hai.
Amar:-Sir,yahan aaiye.
Evidence-bag dekhte hi Rahul bhi hairan hojaata hai.
Rahul:-(Priyanka-ki-file-picture-dekhte-hue)Ye..ye to Priyanka ka mangalsutra hai.(chor-ka-collar-pakarte-hue)Kahan se churaya ise?
Jawaani-Maastani Mashobra ke sabse badnaam dance-bar mein se hai.Saal ke iss vakt Bharat ke kone-kone se khatarnak aur ek-se-barhkar-ek Dons, Gunde, apradhi aate hain.Sharab aur Heroain-Cocain paani ki tarah behta hai.Bar mein sthit PA(Public-Announcement) system sabhi gundo ko dance-programme ki suchna deta rehta hai.Achanak nach-gaane ke beech kisi ki awaz gunjti hai.
Nisha:-Naach-gaane mein khalal daalne ke liye shama chahti hoon.Mujhe apahran hue Saurav-Priyanka ki talaash hai.Aap logo mein se jinhe bhi unke baare mein pata hai yaaa fir jinhone bhi unka apaharan kiya hai kripa kar bata de.
Don-1:-(arabi-accent)And why should we help you.
Nisha:-(hanste-hue)Apne table ke niche dikho.
Sabhi log apne table ke niche dikhte hain.Time bomb dekhte hi sabki seetti-peetti gum hojaati hai.
Nisha:-Lets start again.Kisne unka apaharan kiya hai.
Ek-ek kar saare gunde maut ke khauff se sab-kuch sach-sach ugal dete hain.Durbhagyawash kisiko bhi unke baare mein nahi pata tha.
Nisha:-I believe you.Once assured I am safe out of here,bombs will automatically diffuse.
Kuch hi der mein dono chor ke diye pate par apne-aap ko paate hain.Puchtach karne par pata chala ki kisi dusre nav-vivahit jore ne vah mangalsutra 18'May,2012 ko Mashobra se Kangan-Jewellery shop se kharida tha.Fir dono Mashobra ke Kangan dukan pahunchte hain.Vahan par dukandar ko 18'May,2012 ki video-tape dikhane ko bolte hain.Dukandar bhi kisi sheesht bachche ki tarah video-recording nikal unhe dikhata hai.Kuch ghante beetate hain.
Amar:-(TV-ki-or-ishaara-karke)Iss aadmi ne mangalsutra becha tha.
Rahul:-Amar,iss admi ki photo uthao aur pure Shimla aur aaspas ke illake mein Wanted-Posters lagado.I think we have got our kidnappers.
Mashobra ke hasin vadiyon mein tahalti Nisha ke dimaag mein kai sawaal uthal-puthal kar rahe hain.
Nisha:-(man-mein)Unhe aasman kha gaya ya zameen nigal gayi.Sabhi bare-bare gunde aur dons se bhi puchtach karli.Aisa lag raha hai ki apaharankarta iss duniya ke hai hi nahi.
Akhiri vakya ne jaise Nisha ke dimaag ki ghanti bajadi.
Nisha:-(excited)Ek minute....Silly me....it makes perfect sense.Apaharankarta kisi aur duniya ka nahi, balki hai hi nahi.Saurav-Priyanka ka apaharan hua hi nahi hai.Unhe shayad shak hogaya tha ki koi unpar nazar rakh raha hai.Aur isliye ve khud gayab hogaye.Par 4-saalon se mera Shimla-Mashobra ka network Railway-Station, havai-adde etc par nazar rakhe hue hai.Kisi ne bhi unhe inn jagahon par nahi dekha.Iska matlab ve dono abhi bhi Shimla-Mashobra mein kahin chipe baithe hain.Mujhe unke chupne ki jagah ka pata lagana hoga.And I know someone who can help me.
"Terhi-nazaron se dekh rahi hoon 1-gaj(yards) ki doori se Kaptan-Sahib ke bageeche ko.Miloge mujhse to paoge kaale heere."
Iss khat ko apne hotel-room mein baitha teesri baar parh raha tha.Ye Saurav ki handwriting thi.Saurav jaanta tha ki main uski talaash mein ayunga.Main ab manzil ke paas tha.Bas paheli suljhane ki deri thi.
"Computer par kya kar rahe ho?"---chai ki chuskiyan lete Rahul ne Amar se pucha.Posters lag jaane ke baad ab dono sirf intezar hi kar sakte hain.
Amar:-Chor ki darhi mein tinka nikala.
Rahul:-(bhanve-sikorte-hue)Matlab?
Amar:-Scylla-Company ki sthapna 2002 mein hui thi.Theek usi samay jab Saurav aur uski team ne research shuru kiya tha.
Rahul:-Isme kya ajeeb hai.
Amar:-Sir agar aap koi nayi company khol rahe hain to turant hi kisi research work par paisa nahi lagaenge.Research shuru hone se pehle Saurav kai companiyon ke paas gaya tha sponsoring ke liye.Par saari companiyon ne prastav thukra diya.Tab Scylla-Company ne sponsor karne saamne aaye.Aur sir sabse ajib baat ye hai ki aaj-tak koi bhi Mr.Anderson se personally nahi mila hai.Deals-approval, Board-Meeting, Press-Conference--sab unki secretary Miss.Nisha handle karti hai.It seems Mr.Anderson doesn't even exists.
Rahul:-To tum kehna chahte ho ki Scylla-Company ka unke apahran mein hath hai.
Tabhi ek havaldar daure-daure aaya.
Havaldar:-Sir, Wanted-Poster waale ko Mashobra mein chor-bazar ke paas dekha gaya hai.
Rahul aur Amar aadhe ghante mein chor-bazar pahunchte hain.Vahan par saade kapre pehne havaldar apaharankarta ki or ishaara karte hain.Fir dono savdhanipurvak uska picha karne lage.Lekin kuch palon baad apahrankarta ne unn dono ko dekh liya.Bas fir vah aisa bhaga ki Milkha-Singh(no-disrespect) bhi sharma jaye.Bina kuch soche-samjhe kabhi iss gali mein bhagta to kabhi uss gali mein.Chor-bazar mein galiyon ka jaal vahan ke rehne waalon kobhi gum kar deta hai.Rahul-Amar satikta ke saath uske piche daur rahe the.Lekin vah apaharankarta unn galiyon ke rag-rag se vakiff tha aur CID officers pehli baar unn galiyon mein kadam rakh rahe the.Ant mein apahrankarta bhagne mein kamyab hogaya.
Amar:-(hanfte-hue)Damn it!Humne use laghbag pakar hi liya tha.
Rahul:-(hanfte-hue)Wanted-Posters lage hone ke bavjud bhi vo chor-bazar aaya kyunki vo inn galiyon ko bhali-bhanti jaanta tha.(sighs)Raat hone chali hai.Talaash kal hi mumkin hai.
Sham ki sansanati hava mein 30-saal ka bhugol-shikshak Mr.Vinod-Saha befikr hokar gana gungunate ghar laut raha hai.Tabhi use apne peeth par kisi nukili cheez ke garne ka aabhas hua.
Nisha:-Chalte raho varna ye chaku aarpar kar dungi.Help me---nothing happens...don't--you're intelligent enough.Bachpan mein mera Bhugol(Geography) kamjor tha lekin Itihaas(History)majboot.Yahan Shimla aur Mashobra ke niche khufiya surangon-tehkhaanon ka jaal hai jinka krantikaari bhagne ke liye upyog karte the.Mujhe unn saari surangon ki details chahiye.
Vinod:-Lekin isme samay lag sakta hai.Shayad puri raat.
Nisha:-Koi dikkat nahi.Raat to kahin bitani hi hai.Tumhaare ghar mehmano ka swagat hota hai na!
Agli subah police-station mein Rahul sabhi police-officers ko nirdesh de raha tha.Tabhi usne Amar ki cheekh suni.
Amar:-Sir ye photo.
Rahul:-Kidnapper ki hai?
Amar kuch buttons dabata hai.
Rahul:-OH MY GOD!!!Ye to Saurav hai.
Amar:-Yes sir.Iska matlab iska apaharan nahi hua hai balki chip raha hai.
Rahul:-Duniya ki nazar se gayab hona hai to kahan chupoge?
Amar:-Jahan use koi dhundne ka soch bhi nahi sake.
Rahul:-Jaise uska cottage!Intelligent work Amar.
Amar:-(khush-hoke)UP waala jo hoon.
Main savere waali flight sehi Shimla pahuncha.Maine paheli suljha lithi.Kathinayi to bahut hui lekin kai ghanto ki mehnat-mashakkat ke baad sabkuch samajh mein aagaya tha.Darasal sthaniye log 'Kaptan-Sahib ka bageecha' Saurav ke cottage ko bulate the.Ye baat mujhe Mrs.Jaidka(parosi) se phone par pata chali.Cottage se 1-gaj ki doori par Craignaino naamak pahari hai---Craig--Steep==Terhi, Naino---aankhe.Flight se utar main uss pahar ke slope par gaya.Door se dekhne par pura pahar ekhi rang ka dikh raha tha.Par paas jaakar dekhne par kuch patharon ko kaale rang ka paaya---kaale-heere.Ek-do pathar hatane par mujhe pahar ke andar pravesh karne ka raasta mil gaya.
Subah Coffee-shop mein baithi Nisha ke saamne Mashobra ka map, surangon-tehkhano ka sketch, jise Vinod-Saha ne raat bhar jag pardarshi-kagaz par banaya tha, rakhe hue hain.Vinod ne ye bhi chetavani di thi ki surang bahut hi kamzor avastha mein hai aur jyada aawaz ve nahi jhel payenge.
Nisha:-(Map-aur-sketch-overlap-karte-hue)Ab Saurav ka cottage yahan hain(map-par-mark-karke)Aur ye hai uska morning-walk route(map-par-route-mark-karke)...Ye raha..iss jagah par route aur surang ki opening overlap karti hai...Craignano pahari.
Nisha jald hi uss pahar ke slope par pahunchti hai jahan use Varun dwara chora gaya raasta dikhta hai.
Nisha:-(mobile-pe)Mr.Anderson...I have found them!
Anderson:-Good!Take your Laptop with yourself.You will need it.
Main dheere-dheere kaali-surangon mein torch ke saare aage barh raha tha.Itni bhayavah aur purani surang maine aajtak nahi dekhi thi.Surangon ki bhul-bhulaiyan mein anek-baar dead-end aaya.Par hamesha Saurav-Priyanka ke milne ki sambhavna nayi urja-sanchar kar deti thi.Karib 2-ghante baad maine surang ke ant mein mandham raushni deki.Uss raushni ki or main daur para aur wahan pahunchne parhi saansli.
Rahul-Amar jald Cottage pahunchte hain.Gate par laga taala kaat andar pravesh karte hain.Andar ka nazara dekhte hi ve dang reh jaate hain.
Amar:-Apne sahi kaha tha sir.Dhool bhari zamin par pairon ke nishan saaf darshate hain ki Saurav-Priyanka yahan chipe hain.
Rahul:-Baahar gate par taala vaise-ka-vaisa 4-saal se latka hua hai.Lekin dono baahar nikalte honge.Yaani cottage mein koi khufiya raasta hai.
Uss tehkhaane ki dasha main bayan bhi nahi kar sakta.Kai jagahon par chattanein gire hue the.Tehkhaane mein 2-raaste aakar mil rahe the---ek par main khara tha.
Priyanka:-(gale-lagate-hue)Mujhe pata tha tum aaoge.
Saurav:-(gale-milte-hue)Thanks mate.
Varun:-Ye sab kaise hua?
Saurav:-Main shuru se tumhe saari baat samjhata hoon.Humlog Brain-Tumor ke illaj par research kar rahe the.Scylla-Company was sponsoring us.2-saal ki kari mehnat ke baad humne virus-bacteria jitne sukshm Neonites ka avishkar kiya.Hota yun ki inn neonites ko rogi ke sharir mein hava dwara pravesh kara diya jaata.Fir neonites seedhe rogike mashtishk(brain) mein pahunchte.Doctor wireless signal dwara kisi ek neonite ko programming kar tumor ki sthiti(position) batata aur vo neonite pehle apne aaspas ke neonites ko program karta aur fir tumor-cells ko nasht kar dete.Operation ke baad doctor neonites ko deactivate kar deta aur neonites brain mein nishkriya hojaate.Aur sharir ki utstarjana-yantra(Excretory-System) unhe baahar nikal fenkti.
Varun:-To fir isme garbri kahan hui.
Priyanka:-L.O.K.I Mode.Programming mein sirf chand codes badal dene se ye Neonites mastishk ke glands par bura asar daalte jisse aadmi jyada lalchi, jyada irshiyalu(jealousy), jyada gussail, ityadi ban jaata.Par vo codes sirf humdono ko hi pata tha.
Saurav:-Fir achanak 9-saal pehle kisine hamaari saari research-data system hack kar churali.Chunki codes sirf humlog jaante the aur vo research-data mein nahi thi, hamaari jaan khatre mein thi.Hume ye bhi pata tha ki ek-dusre ke jaan ke khatir shayad humdono mein se koi ek codes ugal dega.Isliye bina kuch bataye jald-se-jald research-data destroy kar Shimla chale aaye.4-saal tak to sabkuch theek-thak raha.Lekin fir panchve saal hume mehsoos hua ki koi hum par nazar rakh raha hai.Ek din morning walk ke dauran iski pushti bhi hogayi jab ek aurat ko picha karte dekha.Humlog yahan bhi surakshit nahi reh gaye the.Tab hame iss tehkhane ke baare mein pata chala.
Priyanka:-Ek din morning walk ke dauran uss aurat se nazre bacha humlog yahan usi pahari waale raaste se aagaye.Duniya ke nazron mein hum gayab hogaye the.
Saurav:-Par paison ki jarurat thi.Bank aur ATM se paise nikalne mein khatra tha.Inn sab mein Mr.Rao hamare saath the.Ve Priyanka ke gehne ek-ek kar bechte aur paise hame lakar dete.Par ek din police ne use anguthi ke saath pakar liya aur use jail hogayi.Lekin marte dum tak usne hamaare baare mein kisiko kuch bhi nahi bataya.
Tabhi kisi aurat ki aawaz gunj uthi.Jis raaste se main aaya tha usi raaste par koi aurat khari thi.
Nisha:-(beretta-point-karte-hue)Finally, tum dono milhi gaye.
Priyanka:-Varun ye...ye wahi aurat hai.
Fir uss aurat ne mobile nikal kisi ka number dial kiya.Mera mobile baj utha!
Upar cottage mein Rahul-Amar khufiya raaste ki talaash mein lage hue the.
Amar:-Ye deewar andar se khokhla hai.Ho-na-ho iske piche hi khufiya raasta hai.
Rahul:-Sahi keh rahe ho.Ab ise kholne ka trigger khojo.
Amar:-Trigger ko bhi aaspaas hona chahiye taaki jarurat ke samay turant khola jaa sake.
Tabhi Rahul ki nazar switch-board par pari.Usme sabhi switch 'off' mode mein the sivay ek-ke.Rahul uss switch ko dabata hai.Karkarate hue khokhla darwaza beech se khul jaata hai.
Amar:-Seeriyan....
Varun:-(call-cancel-karke)Thank-you Miss.Nisha.Ab mujhe ghariyaali aansu bahane ki jarurat nahi.
Saurav:-(shocked)Tum ise jaa...
Varun:-Now let me tell you complete story.Scylla-Company jo tumhe sponsor karti vo mere dwara banaya gaya shell-company(nakli) hai.Main hoon Shane-Anderson.Bas website aur logos par kisi americi ka chehra laga hai.Shuru mein to mera plan tumhaari research sehi tumdono ko badnam karna tha.
Priyanka:-(Varun-ke-hath-pakar)Badnam..par kyun...Maine tumhe apna sabse acha dost manti thi.....I trusted you.
Varun:-(frustrated)Sirf dost!Main tumse beintiha mohabbat karta tha.Tumhaare liye maine kya-kya nahi kiya.Yahan tak ki jab tum zindagi aur maut ke beech jhool rahi thi to bachaya bhi maine.And whom did you choose--Saurav.
Saurav:-Bas ek baar ishaara kiya hota mere dost.Raaste se hamesha ke liye hat jaata.
Varun:-Kya kare..uss samay bhalai ka keera kaata tha.Par der aaye durust aaye.(Nisha-se)Laptop lao.
Nisha laptop Varun ke saamne rakh deti hai.Varun apni pistol nikal unn dono par taan deta hai.
Varun:-This chaotic world needs a ruler--like me.Maine Neonites ke design mein kuch parivartan kiye hai.Ab main aadmiyon ko control bhi kar sakta hoon.NASA ke saare space programmes par jo Raw-Materials meri company supply karti thi usme Neonites ki ek layer lagaya jaata tha.Jisse jab rocket ke ang prithvi ke vatavaran mein alag hote to Neonites bhi fail jaate the.Neonites iss vakt tumhaare, mere, puri aabadi ke andar hai.
Tabhi wahan kisi ki aawaz gunjti hai.Dono CID officers apni gun Varun par taane hue the.
Amar:-Freeze.Tumhara khel khatam hogaya hai Mr.Varun.
Par dono officers jeet ki khushi mein asavdhan hogaye the.Unhone Nisha ko nahi dekha tha.Nisha chattano ki aar se nikal Amar par goli chalati hai.Lekin Rahul beech mein aajaata hai.Goli use lagti hai aur agle hipal uski maut hojaati hai.Isse pehle Amar kuch samajh paata Nisha ki agli goli uske kandhe ko chute hue nikal jaati hai aur vo behosh hojaata hai.Achanak tehkhaane mein karkarane ki aawaz shuru hojaati hai.Bare-bare chattan toot girne lagte hai.
Nisha:-Oh Shit...
Nisha puri baat bol bhi nahi payi ki upar se girta bara pathar use apna shikar bana leta hai.Ye dekh Varun bahaukla jaata hai.Vo Saurav par goli chalata hai jo uske bilkul bagal se gujarti hai.
Varun:-C'mon Priyanka.Jaldi codes daalo varna mera agla vaar nishana nahi chukega.
Priyanka darte hue laptop mein codes daalti hai aur vapas Saurav ke paas khari hojaati hai.
Screen:-Uploading...97%...98%...99%...100%.....fail-safes activated...Deactivating Neonites...Deactivation Completed.
(Microscopic-View of air:-Hilte-dulte Neonites par halka sa spark hota hai aur fir unka hilna band hojaata hai.)
Varun:-NOO!!!Meri itni saalon ki mehnat aise barbad nahi hosakti.
Gusse se Varun Saurav par goli chala deta hai.Par yahan bhi Priyanka beech mein aa jaati hai.Priyanka dard se zamin par gir jaati hai.Baukhla kar Saurav pistol ki parvah kiye bina Varun se bhir jaata hai.Dono mein larai chalti hai.Kabhi Saurav varun ko maarta hai to kabhi Varun.Achanak Varun ki pistol se goli chal jaati hai.Bandook apna nishana Varun ko chunti hai.Aankho mein ansu le Varun Priyanka ke paas jaata hai.Priyanka ke shant sharir ko apne bahon mein zakar leta hai.Upar se gir rahe pathar tehkhaane ke dono raaste dhak dete hai.
THE END...??
Kisi anjaan-andheri jagah par ek admi laptop ke saamne baith kuch likh raha hai.Uske chehre par shaitani muskan hai.
Computer screen par----
___>Remote Login Access.Password required.
___>***********
___>Access Granted.Disable Failsafes?(Y/N)
___>Y
___>Failsafes disabled.Neonites online.Uploading codes...97%..98%..99%..100%
___>L.O.K.I Mode Enabled
Isi dauran bharat ke kisi kone mein chal rahe satsang-shivir mein---
Guru:-Har yug mein bhagwan vishnu paap ka naash karne ke liye kisi na kisi roop mein aate hain.Kaliyug mein bhi ve Kalki ke roop mein ayenge.Kalki maane Amar(jiska-koi-ant-nahi).Shastron mein likha hai ki UP(Uttar-Pradesh)ke brahmin parivar mein unka janm hoga.Janm ke samay chandrama ke dhanisthka nakshatra mein hone ke kaaran ve amir honge lekin ghamandi nahi.Safed ghore pe savar--(white-stallion-bike...stallion==horse) ve dushton ka naash kar prithvi par punah shanti sthapit karenge.Hari om!
This is end of one story but beginning of another......
Following story contains three different story arcs occurring at different places but at same time.
BLUE_COLOR------->Story of Nisha told from 3rd person point of view.
GREEN_COLOR----->Story of Varun told from 1st person point of view.
ORANGE_COLOR--->Story of CID investigation told from 3rd person point of view
BLACK_COLOR------>Climax of story told from 3rd person point of view
Readers can either read all arc at same time or one arc at one time to avoid confusion. Following story contains few elements from previous part. However author has already incorporated all the necessary elements from previous part. It is completely upto reader to whether read previous part Khoj--Match 13 or not. Reading or not reading will NOT have any effect on this part.
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2004-AD----
Der raat Bangalore mein kisi prayogshala mein bahas chal rahi thi.
Priyanka:-(computer-par-kaam-karte-hue)Inki madad se brain-tumors ka ascharyajanak-roop se illaj kiya jaa sakta hai.
Saurav:-Par ye Neonites Parmanu Bomb se bhi do-guna tabahi machane ki kuvvat rakhte hain.
Priyanka:-L.O.K.I Mode ke codes sirf humlog jaante hain.Tum bekar mein hi over-react kar rahe ho.
2013-AD----
Aaj bhi uss prayogshala mein do log maujud hain.Unme se ek---35-40 umra ka purush---kursi par bandha hai to dusra 3-button Black-Suit pehne 34-35 saal ki aurat bagal mein khari hai.Aurat purush ke pairon se satakar 4-5 candles jalati hai.Pura kamra aadmi ki cheekh se tharrra uthata hai.Aurat usse door hatkar jeb se wrapped Sandwich nikal, khane lagti hai.
Aadmi:-(cheekhte-hue)9-saal pehle achanak hi ek din Saurav-Priyanka apna laptop lekar chale gaye.Ve dono bahut ghabraye hue the.Mujhe kisi codes-vodes ke baare mein nahi pata.
Aurat:-(hath-jharkar)Thank-You Mr.Anjay
Fir aurat coat se Beretta nikal Anjay ko goli maar deti hai.Uske baad mobile nikalti hai.
Mobile:-Have you got the codes, Miss.Nisha?
Nisha:-Not yet.I think only they know the codes Mr.Anderson.
Mobile:-Find them.You had them 4-years ago.You failed.Don't test my patience again.
Main Varun-Malhotra hoon.Yun to main Canada mein rehta hoon lekin apne college ke jigri mitra Saurav-Priyanka ki talash mein Shimla se 10km door Mashobra shahar aaya tha.Dono 9-saal pehle Mashobra aaye the aur 4-saal pehle achanak aise gayab hue ki kisi ko kaano-kaan khabar nahi hui.Dono ke gayab hone ka iljam unke cottage ke purv-malik Mr.Roy par laga.Jab police-station pahuncha to pata chala Roy ki mrityu hogayi hai.Lekin uske paas se baramad ki gayi sabooton mein mujhe Priyanka ki diamond ring mili.Maine agle kuch dino mein Shimla ka chappa-chappa chann maara.Par sab jagah nakaami hath lagi.Kisne unka apaharan kiya hoga.Kya ve jinda hain bhi ya nahin.Achanak dimag mein bijli si kaundhi.Kahin apaharan ka kaaran vyavsaye-sambandhi to nahi.Police ne bhi kabhi iss pahlu par dhyan nahi diya tha.Bas fir kya tha.Agle din main flight se seedha Bangalore sthit unke ghar pahuncha.Bangalore waale ghar par bhi taala latka tha.Saurav-Priyanka kuch aur logon ke saath apne ghar mein bane prayogshala mein reasearch karte the.Chupte-chipate unke ghar mein dakhil hua.Ghar khandhar haalat mein tha.Dhundte hue main unke prayoghsala pahuncha.Ankhe fati-ki-fati reh gayi jab wahan par lash dekhi.Lash Mr.Anjay ki thi jo Saurav ke saath kaam karte the.Halanki main koi jasoos nahi, fir bhi aasani se bata sakta tha ki lash 3-4 din purani hai.Anjay ki maut saaf ishara kar rahi thi ki main sahi raaste par tha.Bangle se baahar nikal main aage barhne ka raasta sochne laga.
CID,Bangalore bureau mein aaj din ki shuruat thori alag hui.
SeniorOfficer,Rahul:-Suna hai aaj naya officer CID join kar raha hai.
Bureau ke parking lot mein white-stallian bike rukti hai.
ACP:-Haan.Bahut hi honhar aur talented officer hai.
Sawaar helmet utar bike ko uchit roop se park karta hai.
JuniorOfficer,Prachi:-He is very down-to-earth inspite of being from rich family.
Fir vo sawaar Bureau mein pravesh karta hai.
JuniorOfficer,Amar:-Officer Amar Vatsa reporting on duty sir.
ACP:-Welcome Amar.
Tabhi phone ki ghanti baj uthti hai.Karan phone uthata hai.
SeniorOfficer,Karan:-Lash mili hai sir.
Prayogshala pahunchte hi sabhi CID officers investigation mein juut gaye.
Karan:-(photo-khenchte-hue)Ek raah chalte aadmi ne kisiko yahanse nikalte dekh police mein report likhwayi.
Amar:-(lash-ka-muyana-karte-hue)Point blank range.Khooni ne pehle ise tarpaya aur fir jaan se maara.
ACP:-Lash ko forensic-lab bhej do.Mujhe iss admi ki kundli chahiye.
Shimla jaane waali train mein baithi Miss.Nisha apne khayalon mein khoyi hui hai.
Nisha:-(man-mein)Main 4-saal pehle Mashobra mein apne lakshya ke bahut karib pahunch chuki thi.Saurav-Priyanka ki har activities par meri nazar rehti.Yahan tak ki unke morning walks route ko bhi follow karti.Maine unka apaharn karne ke liye upyukt din chuna.Lekin uss manhoos din sirf kuch chhano keliye meri nazar unse hati.Aur unka kisi aur ne apaharan kar liya.Par maine bhi haar nahi maani.4-saal aasman-zameen ek kar diya unki talash mein.Meri pure vishwa mein faili khabriyon ka sanjaal bhi unke baare mein khamosh rahi hai.Akhir aisa kaun sa apaharkarta paida ho gaya jo meri aankhon mein dhool jhonkta aaraha hai.Mujhe ab tarika badalna hoga.
CID Bureau mein----
Prachi:-Lash Mr.Anjay ki hai.Expert in Nanotechnology.9-saal pehle ye,Mr.Suresh,Saurav-Sharma aur Priyanka-Sharma Brain-Tumor illaj par kaam kar rahe the.
ACP:-Ye Saurav-Priyanka wahi jora haina jo 4-saal pehle gayab hua tha.
Rahul:-Yes sir.Inhone usi prayogshala mein Neonites ka avishkar kiya jiske jariye kathin-se-kathin Brain-Tumors ka illaj minuton mein hojaata.
Karan:-Inke research ko Scylla-Company sponsor karti thi.Scylla america ki bahut bari raw-material supplier company hai.Ye NASA rocket-ships ke liye raw-material supply karti hai.Haal hi mein jo naya upgrah NASA dwara bheja gaya, use safal banane mein iss company ka bara hath tha.Company ka malik Mr.Shane-Anderson hai.
Amar:-Jab 9-saal pehle Saurav-Priyanka sab kuch chorr,Shimla chale gaye to research aur funding band hogayi.
ACP:-Saurav-Priyanka ke gayab aur Mr.Anjay ki maut aapas mein jure hue hain.Rahul aur Amar---tum dono fauran Shimla jao aur Saurav-Priyanka case ki naye sire se jaanch karo.
Anjay ki maut ke baad mujhe aur koi raah nahi dikh raha tha.Par tabhi mujhe research team ke chauthe member Mr.Suresh ki yaad aayi.Agar Anjay ka katl Saurav-Priyanka ke apaharankarta nekiya haito agla shikar Suresh hoga.Bina koi pal gavaye uske ghar pahuncha aur ghanti bajayai.Ek home-nurse ne darwaza khola.Nurse bina kuch kahe mujhe Mr.Suresh ke kamre mein lejaati hai.Suresh wheel-chair par baithe khirkiyan dekh raha tha.Pairon tale zameen khisak gayi jab pata chala ki 3-saal pehle paralysis se unka pura sharir jarr hogaya.Ab ve har-mans ka putla reh gaye hain.Main Suresh ke paas ghutno par baith gaya.
Varun:-Pata nahi tum meri baat sunbhi paa rahe hoya nahi.Kaash main tum logo ke sampark mein rehta.To shayad kuch madad kar paata.
Suresh ke annsu saaf bata rahe the ki vo meri baato ko bhali-bhanti samajh raha hai.
Varun:-Saurav-Priyanka ki jaan khatre mein hai.Agar tumhe unke baare mein kuch bhi pata hai to please mujhe batao.
Suresh ki machalti aanke kisi or ishara kar rahi thi.Uski aankhe purani mez ki or ishara kar rahi thi.Main mez ke paas gaya aur usme sthit drawer khola.Drawer khulte hi meri nazar lifafe par pari.Lifafe par likha tha--Varun.
Shimla pahunchte hi Rahul-Amar seedhe police-station kior ravana hote hain.Vahan par Head-Inspector ne Saurav-Priyanka ki case file unhe saump di.Dono case ko study karne mein joot gaye.
Karib 3-ghante baad----
Rahul:-Ye sach mein bahut terha case hai.Sabse bara raaz jewelleries gayab hone ka hai.Mr.Roy akhiri dum tak kehta reh gaya ki usne koi chori nahi kari.Kahin apharankarta nehi to gehne churaye nahi?
Amar:-Agar aisa hai to kidnappers ne abtak saare jewelleries bech diye honge.Aage barhne ka sachmuch koi raasta nahi hai.
Tabhi kisi ko maarne ki awaz sunai deti hai.Hawaldar kisi ko peet raha tha.Amar hawaldar ko rokne jaata hai.
Hawaldar:-Sir ye admi chori karte hue pakra gaya.(Evidence-bag-dikhate-hue)Isne ye churaya.
Amar evidence-bag ko dekh kar hairan hojaata hai.
Amar:-Sir,yahan aaiye.
Evidence-bag dekhte hi Rahul bhi hairan hojaata hai.
Rahul:-(Priyanka-ki-file-picture-dekhte-hue)Ye..ye to Priyanka ka mangalsutra hai.(chor-ka-collar-pakarte-hue)Kahan se churaya ise?
Jawaani-Maastani Mashobra ke sabse badnaam dance-bar mein se hai.Saal ke iss vakt Bharat ke kone-kone se khatarnak aur ek-se-barhkar-ek Dons, Gunde, apradhi aate hain.Sharab aur Heroain-Cocain paani ki tarah behta hai.Bar mein sthit PA(Public-Announcement) system sabhi gundo ko dance-programme ki suchna deta rehta hai.Achanak nach-gaane ke beech kisi ki awaz gunjti hai.
Nisha:-Naach-gaane mein khalal daalne ke liye shama chahti hoon.Mujhe apahran hue Saurav-Priyanka ki talaash hai.Aap logo mein se jinhe bhi unke baare mein pata hai yaaa fir jinhone bhi unka apaharan kiya hai kripa kar bata de.
Don-1:-(arabi-accent)And why should we help you.
Nisha:-(hanste-hue)Apne table ke niche dikho.
Sabhi log apne table ke niche dikhte hain.Time bomb dekhte hi sabki seetti-peetti gum hojaati hai.
Nisha:-Lets start again.Kisne unka apaharan kiya hai.
Ek-ek kar saare gunde maut ke khauff se sab-kuch sach-sach ugal dete hain.Durbhagyawash kisiko bhi unke baare mein nahi pata tha.
Nisha:-I believe you.Once assured I am safe out of here,bombs will automatically diffuse.
Kuch hi der mein dono chor ke diye pate par apne-aap ko paate hain.Puchtach karne par pata chala ki kisi dusre nav-vivahit jore ne vah mangalsutra 18'May,2012 ko Mashobra se Kangan-Jewellery shop se kharida tha.Fir dono Mashobra ke Kangan dukan pahunchte hain.Vahan par dukandar ko 18'May,2012 ki video-tape dikhane ko bolte hain.Dukandar bhi kisi sheesht bachche ki tarah video-recording nikal unhe dikhata hai.Kuch ghante beetate hain.
Amar:-(TV-ki-or-ishaara-karke)Iss aadmi ne mangalsutra becha tha.
Rahul:-Amar,iss admi ki photo uthao aur pure Shimla aur aaspas ke illake mein Wanted-Posters lagado.I think we have got our kidnappers.
Mashobra ke hasin vadiyon mein tahalti Nisha ke dimaag mein kai sawaal uthal-puthal kar rahe hain.
Nisha:-(man-mein)Unhe aasman kha gaya ya zameen nigal gayi.Sabhi bare-bare gunde aur dons se bhi puchtach karli.Aisa lag raha hai ki apaharankarta iss duniya ke hai hi nahi.
Akhiri vakya ne jaise Nisha ke dimaag ki ghanti bajadi.
Nisha:-(excited)Ek minute....Silly me....it makes perfect sense.Apaharankarta kisi aur duniya ka nahi, balki hai hi nahi.Saurav-Priyanka ka apaharan hua hi nahi hai.Unhe shayad shak hogaya tha ki koi unpar nazar rakh raha hai.Aur isliye ve khud gayab hogaye.Par 4-saalon se mera Shimla-Mashobra ka network Railway-Station, havai-adde etc par nazar rakhe hue hai.Kisi ne bhi unhe inn jagahon par nahi dekha.Iska matlab ve dono abhi bhi Shimla-Mashobra mein kahin chipe baithe hain.Mujhe unke chupne ki jagah ka pata lagana hoga.And I know someone who can help me.
"Terhi-nazaron se dekh rahi hoon 1-gaj(yards) ki doori se Kaptan-Sahib ke bageeche ko.Miloge mujhse to paoge kaale heere."
Iss khat ko apne hotel-room mein baitha teesri baar parh raha tha.Ye Saurav ki handwriting thi.Saurav jaanta tha ki main uski talaash mein ayunga.Main ab manzil ke paas tha.Bas paheli suljhane ki deri thi.
"Computer par kya kar rahe ho?"---chai ki chuskiyan lete Rahul ne Amar se pucha.Posters lag jaane ke baad ab dono sirf intezar hi kar sakte hain.
Amar:-Chor ki darhi mein tinka nikala.
Rahul:-(bhanve-sikorte-hue)Matlab?
Amar:-Scylla-Company ki sthapna 2002 mein hui thi.Theek usi samay jab Saurav aur uski team ne research shuru kiya tha.
Rahul:-Isme kya ajeeb hai.
Amar:-Sir agar aap koi nayi company khol rahe hain to turant hi kisi research work par paisa nahi lagaenge.Research shuru hone se pehle Saurav kai companiyon ke paas gaya tha sponsoring ke liye.Par saari companiyon ne prastav thukra diya.Tab Scylla-Company ne sponsor karne saamne aaye.Aur sir sabse ajib baat ye hai ki aaj-tak koi bhi Mr.Anderson se personally nahi mila hai.Deals-approval, Board-Meeting, Press-Conference--sab unki secretary Miss.Nisha handle karti hai.It seems Mr.Anderson doesn't even exists.
Rahul:-To tum kehna chahte ho ki Scylla-Company ka unke apahran mein hath hai.
Tabhi ek havaldar daure-daure aaya.
Havaldar:-Sir, Wanted-Poster waale ko Mashobra mein chor-bazar ke paas dekha gaya hai.
Rahul aur Amar aadhe ghante mein chor-bazar pahunchte hain.Vahan par saade kapre pehne havaldar apaharankarta ki or ishaara karte hain.Fir dono savdhanipurvak uska picha karne lage.Lekin kuch palon baad apahrankarta ne unn dono ko dekh liya.Bas fir vah aisa bhaga ki Milkha-Singh(no-disrespect) bhi sharma jaye.Bina kuch soche-samjhe kabhi iss gali mein bhagta to kabhi uss gali mein.Chor-bazar mein galiyon ka jaal vahan ke rehne waalon kobhi gum kar deta hai.Rahul-Amar satikta ke saath uske piche daur rahe the.Lekin vah apaharankarta unn galiyon ke rag-rag se vakiff tha aur CID officers pehli baar unn galiyon mein kadam rakh rahe the.Ant mein apahrankarta bhagne mein kamyab hogaya.
Amar:-(hanfte-hue)Damn it!Humne use laghbag pakar hi liya tha.
Rahul:-(hanfte-hue)Wanted-Posters lage hone ke bavjud bhi vo chor-bazar aaya kyunki vo inn galiyon ko bhali-bhanti jaanta tha.(sighs)Raat hone chali hai.Talaash kal hi mumkin hai.
Sham ki sansanati hava mein 30-saal ka bhugol-shikshak Mr.Vinod-Saha befikr hokar gana gungunate ghar laut raha hai.Tabhi use apne peeth par kisi nukili cheez ke garne ka aabhas hua.
Nisha:-Chalte raho varna ye chaku aarpar kar dungi.Help me---nothing happens...don't--you're intelligent enough.Bachpan mein mera Bhugol(Geography) kamjor tha lekin Itihaas(History)majboot.Yahan Shimla aur Mashobra ke niche khufiya surangon-tehkhaanon ka jaal hai jinka krantikaari bhagne ke liye upyog karte the.Mujhe unn saari surangon ki details chahiye.
Vinod:-Lekin isme samay lag sakta hai.Shayad puri raat.
Nisha:-Koi dikkat nahi.Raat to kahin bitani hi hai.Tumhaare ghar mehmano ka swagat hota hai na!
Agli subah police-station mein Rahul sabhi police-officers ko nirdesh de raha tha.Tabhi usne Amar ki cheekh suni.
Amar:-Sir ye photo.
Rahul:-Kidnapper ki hai?
Amar kuch buttons dabata hai.
Rahul:-OH MY GOD!!!Ye to Saurav hai.
Amar:-Yes sir.Iska matlab iska apaharan nahi hua hai balki chip raha hai.
Rahul:-Duniya ki nazar se gayab hona hai to kahan chupoge?
Amar:-Jahan use koi dhundne ka soch bhi nahi sake.
Rahul:-Jaise uska cottage!Intelligent work Amar.
Amar:-(khush-hoke)UP waala jo hoon.
Main savere waali flight sehi Shimla pahuncha.Maine paheli suljha lithi.Kathinayi to bahut hui lekin kai ghanto ki mehnat-mashakkat ke baad sabkuch samajh mein aagaya tha.Darasal sthaniye log 'Kaptan-Sahib ka bageecha' Saurav ke cottage ko bulate the.Ye baat mujhe Mrs.Jaidka(parosi) se phone par pata chali.Cottage se 1-gaj ki doori par Craignaino naamak pahari hai---Craig--Steep==Terhi, Naino---aankhe.Flight se utar main uss pahar ke slope par gaya.Door se dekhne par pura pahar ekhi rang ka dikh raha tha.Par paas jaakar dekhne par kuch patharon ko kaale rang ka paaya---kaale-heere.Ek-do pathar hatane par mujhe pahar ke andar pravesh karne ka raasta mil gaya.
Subah Coffee-shop mein baithi Nisha ke saamne Mashobra ka map, surangon-tehkhano ka sketch, jise Vinod-Saha ne raat bhar jag pardarshi-kagaz par banaya tha, rakhe hue hain.Vinod ne ye bhi chetavani di thi ki surang bahut hi kamzor avastha mein hai aur jyada aawaz ve nahi jhel payenge.
Nisha:-(Map-aur-sketch-overlap-karte-hue)Ab Saurav ka cottage yahan hain(map-par-mark-karke)Aur ye hai uska morning-walk route(map-par-route-mark-karke)...Ye raha..iss jagah par route aur surang ki opening overlap karti hai...Craignano pahari.
Nisha jald hi uss pahar ke slope par pahunchti hai jahan use Varun dwara chora gaya raasta dikhta hai.
Nisha:-(mobile-pe)Mr.Anderson...I have found them!
Anderson:-Good!Take your Laptop with yourself.You will need it.
Main dheere-dheere kaali-surangon mein torch ke saare aage barh raha tha.Itni bhayavah aur purani surang maine aajtak nahi dekhi thi.Surangon ki bhul-bhulaiyan mein anek-baar dead-end aaya.Par hamesha Saurav-Priyanka ke milne ki sambhavna nayi urja-sanchar kar deti thi.Karib 2-ghante baad maine surang ke ant mein mandham raushni deki.Uss raushni ki or main daur para aur wahan pahunchne parhi saansli.
Rahul-Amar jald Cottage pahunchte hain.Gate par laga taala kaat andar pravesh karte hain.Andar ka nazara dekhte hi ve dang reh jaate hain.
Amar:-Apne sahi kaha tha sir.Dhool bhari zamin par pairon ke nishan saaf darshate hain ki Saurav-Priyanka yahan chipe hain.
Rahul:-Baahar gate par taala vaise-ka-vaisa 4-saal se latka hua hai.Lekin dono baahar nikalte honge.Yaani cottage mein koi khufiya raasta hai.
Uss tehkhaane ki dasha main bayan bhi nahi kar sakta.Kai jagahon par chattanein gire hue the.Tehkhaane mein 2-raaste aakar mil rahe the---ek par main khara tha.
Priyanka:-(gale-lagate-hue)Mujhe pata tha tum aaoge.
Saurav:-(gale-milte-hue)Thanks mate.
Varun:-Ye sab kaise hua?
Saurav:-Main shuru se tumhe saari baat samjhata hoon.Humlog Brain-Tumor ke illaj par research kar rahe the.Scylla-Company was sponsoring us.2-saal ki kari mehnat ke baad humne virus-bacteria jitne sukshm Neonites ka avishkar kiya.Hota yun ki inn neonites ko rogi ke sharir mein hava dwara pravesh kara diya jaata.Fir neonites seedhe rogike mashtishk(brain) mein pahunchte.Doctor wireless signal dwara kisi ek neonite ko programming kar tumor ki sthiti(position) batata aur vo neonite pehle apne aaspas ke neonites ko program karta aur fir tumor-cells ko nasht kar dete.Operation ke baad doctor neonites ko deactivate kar deta aur neonites brain mein nishkriya hojaate.Aur sharir ki utstarjana-yantra(Excretory-System) unhe baahar nikal fenkti.
Varun:-To fir isme garbri kahan hui.
Priyanka:-L.O.K.I Mode.Programming mein sirf chand codes badal dene se ye Neonites mastishk ke glands par bura asar daalte jisse aadmi jyada lalchi, jyada irshiyalu(jealousy), jyada gussail, ityadi ban jaata.Par vo codes sirf humdono ko hi pata tha.
Saurav:-Fir achanak 9-saal pehle kisine hamaari saari research-data system hack kar churali.Chunki codes sirf humlog jaante the aur vo research-data mein nahi thi, hamaari jaan khatre mein thi.Hume ye bhi pata tha ki ek-dusre ke jaan ke khatir shayad humdono mein se koi ek codes ugal dega.Isliye bina kuch bataye jald-se-jald research-data destroy kar Shimla chale aaye.4-saal tak to sabkuch theek-thak raha.Lekin fir panchve saal hume mehsoos hua ki koi hum par nazar rakh raha hai.Ek din morning walk ke dauran iski pushti bhi hogayi jab ek aurat ko picha karte dekha.Humlog yahan bhi surakshit nahi reh gaye the.Tab hame iss tehkhane ke baare mein pata chala.
Priyanka:-Ek din morning walk ke dauran uss aurat se nazre bacha humlog yahan usi pahari waale raaste se aagaye.Duniya ke nazron mein hum gayab hogaye the.
Saurav:-Par paison ki jarurat thi.Bank aur ATM se paise nikalne mein khatra tha.Inn sab mein Mr.Rao hamare saath the.Ve Priyanka ke gehne ek-ek kar bechte aur paise hame lakar dete.Par ek din police ne use anguthi ke saath pakar liya aur use jail hogayi.Lekin marte dum tak usne hamaare baare mein kisiko kuch bhi nahi bataya.
Tabhi kisi aurat ki aawaz gunj uthi.Jis raaste se main aaya tha usi raaste par koi aurat khari thi.
Nisha:-(beretta-point-karte-hue)Finally, tum dono milhi gaye.
Priyanka:-Varun ye...ye wahi aurat hai.
Fir uss aurat ne mobile nikal kisi ka number dial kiya.Mera mobile baj utha!
Upar cottage mein Rahul-Amar khufiya raaste ki talaash mein lage hue the.
Amar:-Ye deewar andar se khokhla hai.Ho-na-ho iske piche hi khufiya raasta hai.
Rahul:-Sahi keh rahe ho.Ab ise kholne ka trigger khojo.
Amar:-Trigger ko bhi aaspaas hona chahiye taaki jarurat ke samay turant khola jaa sake.
Tabhi Rahul ki nazar switch-board par pari.Usme sabhi switch 'off' mode mein the sivay ek-ke.Rahul uss switch ko dabata hai.Karkarate hue khokhla darwaza beech se khul jaata hai.
Amar:-Seeriyan....
Varun:-(call-cancel-karke)Thank-you Miss.Nisha.Ab mujhe ghariyaali aansu bahane ki jarurat nahi.
Saurav:-(shocked)Tum ise jaa...
Varun:-Now let me tell you complete story.Scylla-Company jo tumhe sponsor karti vo mere dwara banaya gaya shell-company(nakli) hai.Main hoon Shane-Anderson.Bas website aur logos par kisi americi ka chehra laga hai.Shuru mein to mera plan tumhaari research sehi tumdono ko badnam karna tha.
Priyanka:-(Varun-ke-hath-pakar)Badnam..par kyun...Maine tumhe apna sabse acha dost manti thi.....I trusted you.
Varun:-(frustrated)Sirf dost!Main tumse beintiha mohabbat karta tha.Tumhaare liye maine kya-kya nahi kiya.Yahan tak ki jab tum zindagi aur maut ke beech jhool rahi thi to bachaya bhi maine.And whom did you choose--Saurav.
Saurav:-Bas ek baar ishaara kiya hota mere dost.Raaste se hamesha ke liye hat jaata.
Varun:-Kya kare..uss samay bhalai ka keera kaata tha.Par der aaye durust aaye.(Nisha-se)Laptop lao.
Nisha laptop Varun ke saamne rakh deti hai.Varun apni pistol nikal unn dono par taan deta hai.
Varun:-This chaotic world needs a ruler--like me.Maine Neonites ke design mein kuch parivartan kiye hai.Ab main aadmiyon ko control bhi kar sakta hoon.NASA ke saare space programmes par jo Raw-Materials meri company supply karti thi usme Neonites ki ek layer lagaya jaata tha.Jisse jab rocket ke ang prithvi ke vatavaran mein alag hote to Neonites bhi fail jaate the.Neonites iss vakt tumhaare, mere, puri aabadi ke andar hai.
Tabhi wahan kisi ki aawaz gunjti hai.Dono CID officers apni gun Varun par taane hue the.
Amar:-Freeze.Tumhara khel khatam hogaya hai Mr.Varun.
Par dono officers jeet ki khushi mein asavdhan hogaye the.Unhone Nisha ko nahi dekha tha.Nisha chattano ki aar se nikal Amar par goli chalati hai.Lekin Rahul beech mein aajaata hai.Goli use lagti hai aur agle hipal uski maut hojaati hai.Isse pehle Amar kuch samajh paata Nisha ki agli goli uske kandhe ko chute hue nikal jaati hai aur vo behosh hojaata hai.Achanak tehkhaane mein karkarane ki aawaz shuru hojaati hai.Bare-bare chattan toot girne lagte hai.
Nisha:-Oh Shit...
Nisha puri baat bol bhi nahi payi ki upar se girta bara pathar use apna shikar bana leta hai.Ye dekh Varun bahaukla jaata hai.Vo Saurav par goli chalata hai jo uske bilkul bagal se gujarti hai.
Varun:-C'mon Priyanka.Jaldi codes daalo varna mera agla vaar nishana nahi chukega.
Priyanka darte hue laptop mein codes daalti hai aur vapas Saurav ke paas khari hojaati hai.
Screen:-Uploading...97%...98%...99%...100%.....fail-safes activated...Deactivating Neonites...Deactivation Completed.
(Microscopic-View of air:-Hilte-dulte Neonites par halka sa spark hota hai aur fir unka hilna band hojaata hai.)
Varun:-NOO!!!Meri itni saalon ki mehnat aise barbad nahi hosakti.
Gusse se Varun Saurav par goli chala deta hai.Par yahan bhi Priyanka beech mein aa jaati hai.Priyanka dard se zamin par gir jaati hai.Baukhla kar Saurav pistol ki parvah kiye bina Varun se bhir jaata hai.Dono mein larai chalti hai.Kabhi Saurav varun ko maarta hai to kabhi Varun.Achanak Varun ki pistol se goli chal jaati hai.Bandook apna nishana Varun ko chunti hai.Aankho mein ansu le Varun Priyanka ke paas jaata hai.Priyanka ke shant sharir ko apne bahon mein zakar leta hai.Upar se gir rahe pathar tehkhaane ke dono raaste dhak dete hai.
THE END...??
Kisi anjaan-andheri jagah par ek admi laptop ke saamne baith kuch likh raha hai.Uske chehre par shaitani muskan hai.
Computer screen par----
___>Remote Login Access.Password required.
___>***********
___>Access Granted.Disable Failsafes?(Y/N)
___>Y
___>Failsafes disabled.Neonites online.Uploading codes...97%..98%..99%..100%
___>L.O.K.I Mode Enabled
Isi dauran bharat ke kisi kone mein chal rahe satsang-shivir mein---
Guru:-Har yug mein bhagwan vishnu paap ka naash karne ke liye kisi na kisi roop mein aate hain.Kaliyug mein bhi ve Kalki ke roop mein ayenge.Kalki maane Amar(jiska-koi-ant-nahi).Shastron mein likha hai ki UP(Uttar-Pradesh)ke brahmin parivar mein unka janm hoga.Janm ke samay chandrama ke dhanisthka nakshatra mein hone ke kaaran ve amir honge lekin ghamandi nahi.Safed ghore pe savar--(white-stallion-bike...stallion==horse) ve dushton ka naash kar prithvi par punah shanti sthapit karenge.Hari om!
This is end of one story but beginning of another......
Rating - 78/100
Word Limit Penalty (Minus 5)
Final Rating - 73/100
Judge's Comments - "Your use of imagery is brilliant and the dialogues are believable. At first I was confused by the color coding but nicely executed. I was captivated by the events and put off by the ending idea has potential. I suggest re-write the climax."
Result - Rahul Ranjan wins the match & qualifies for quarter finals. Mehfooz Ali is eliminated from Freelance Talents Championship.
Judge - Mr. Mayank Sharma (Author)
महफूज भाई डायलाग तो बहुत अच्छे लिखे है। कुछ जगहो पर हंसी बहुत आई। राहुल ने कहानी का presentation काफी अच्छा बनाया है।
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